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It's a very erotic story! Sex and marriage on an exploding volcano. Pretty graphic phallic symbolism. Careful mk might have to censor you!
thenewgreen · 4380 days ago · link ·
I had made all the revisions and for whatever reason, it didn't take. I'm sure it's my fault, but I didn't save the revisions. I've just gone through and made the changes again. I really appreciate you taking the time to help me out. My punctuation is horrible and I actually learned a great deal from your edits. "Really, I did learn a lot." He said. Thanks!
thenewgreen · 4381 days ago · link ·
I guess it is phallic, isn't it? I really hadn't considered this ;) As I was writing I just kept adding things.