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thenewgreen  ·  4423 days ago  ·  link  ·    ·  parent  ·  post: A Short Story I wrote Last Night

I had made all the revisions and for whatever reason, it didn't take. I'm sure it's my fault, but I didn't save the revisions.

I've just gone through and made the changes again. I really appreciate you taking the time to help me out. My punctuation is horrible and I actually learned a great deal from your edits.

"Really, I did learn a lot." He said.

Thanks!