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comment by rezzeJ
rezzeJ  ·  2268 days ago  ·  link  ·    ·  parent  ·  post: Today's Writing Prompt: Insignificance

I love the flow from the infinite to the finite in this, and then the contrasts in the last stanza.

lil  ·  2268 days ago  ·  link  ·  


I hate when people write disclaimers - but ... I can see places where I can make better word choices, along the lines of "stupified, eyes wide." Improvements encouraged.