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Mindwolf · 4651 days ago · link · · parent · post: A song we are going to put on our upcoming album... nearly done
Very nice. I like the lyrics and the guitar.
Now my amateur two cents: The song seems to be predominantly reside in the higher tone levels. If I were mixing this I would raise the levels of the bass track. I could barely hear it. (Though it could be these crappy earbuds I use at work) Strings are not a bad idea though I would not go for it. The raspy guitar and raising the bass levels (See how my ideas intertwine?) gives it more of a bluesy, smoky bar room feel. Even though smoky bar rooms don't really exist any more. I think a female backing vocal would really add to the track.
thenewgreen · 4651 days ago · link ·
Thanks for the feedback, it's really helpful. I always wrestle with knowing when to put on the breaks as far as adding too much to a song. Perhaps you are right and strings aren't necessary? It sure as hell would save me some time. I have used a lot of orchestration on the past two albums with strings and horns and I had vowed not to use ANY on this one but this song just seemed to beg for strings. Maybe I should stick to my guns.
Because it's hard to hear these songs with a fresh pair of ears, I really appreciate the feedback. I do take such things in to consideration. Female backing vocal -- I'll look in to that too. Great advice!
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