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lil · 3684 days ago · link · · parent · post: Today's Writing Prompt: What Can a Broken Heart Do?

Your lines are inspiring me, rezzeJ and thenewgreen

tng - could be a song

rezzeJ - I love the idea of the three blank dice having desires, but blanked by lies, tension, and cloudiness...

I'll have something by midnight.

_refugee_ is not experiencing a broken heart right now...

humanodon might be... or might be between broken hearts

flagamuffin - who knows?

galen probably...

and all our hearts are broken by 8bit's temporary absence...

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_refugee_ · 3684 days ago · link ·

+discuss+discuss

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galen · 3682 days ago · link ·

Rather than "Freedom from love / Freedom from the heartache," I used to think the lyrics were "Freedom from the freedom from the heartache." I think I like it better that way.

+discuss+discuss

galen · 3681 days ago · link ·

  You've broken my heart into three little pieces:
  One for you
  One for me
  One for us.

  I know I can't blame you but
  Who else is there for it?
  It is you who has crushed me
  To dust

  And I want to request of you, immediately
  Please reprise
  your philosophies
  Of love

  'Cuz it seems to me lately
  You've a mutable temper
  And it's kinda hard
  For me to trust

+discuss+discuss

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lil · 3680 days ago · link ·

  You've thrown me some crumbs
  That I follow discreetly
  hoping somewhere that
  I'll find a crust

  but I'm tired of waiting
  and tired of trying
  though I know that 
  you can't be rushed - - -
  it looks like it's
  love me or bust.