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A lot of people in the slam poetry community I am part of in the Jersey City, NJ/New York City area really hate this poem. They think it's just a bunch of drivel and some find it offensive. What do you guys think of this poem?
coffeesp00ns · 3668 days ago · link ·
interesting ideas, poor execution. I have no idea how to make it better. Maybe I just don't "get" some of the metaphors, but they feel like they come from like a bad Matthew Good Band song.
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ArtemusBlank · 3668 days ago · link ·
You're not the only one that didn't get this poem. I didn't really get it either. It just seemed so confusing to me.