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lil  ·  4178 days ago  ·  link  ·    ·  parent  ·  post: SOME F**KING WRITING TIPS

Someone is looking for something: Man looks for acceptance and love in his dog companion. Dog looks for lamb. Commercial version: They find it. Literary version: They both find it. They both lose it.





_refugee_  ·  4175 days ago  ·  link  ·  

Literary version: They both find it and eat it.