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goobster  ·  1013 days ago  ·  link  ·    ·  parent  ·  post: Millennials Aren’t Killing Industries. We’re Just Broke and Your Business Sucks

Professional copy-editor here.

Yes. The punctuation in that article is atrocious. Both the semi colon and colon in that first paragraph are just completely wrong.

Couldn't read any further, honestly.

katakowsj  ·  1013 days ago  ·  link  ·  

Bummer for you. Honestly.