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kleinbl00  ·  3180 days ago  ·  link  ·    ·  parent  ·  post: The 2016 iteration of the worst first sentences prize

No, I'm perfectly happy throwing out the whole book on literary techniques. It all goes back to Bulwer-Lytton:

    It was a dark and stormy night; the rain fell in torrents — except at occasional intervals, when it was checked by a violent gust of wind which swept up the streets (for it is in London that our scene lies), rattling along the housetops, and fiercely agitating the scanty flame of the lamps that struggled against the darkness.

Sure - that ain't great. But it's evocative. And it's 160 years old. And, you know, fuck off to everyone:

    It was a dark and stormy night; the rain fell in torrents, except at occasional intervals, when it was checked by a violent gust of wind which swept up the streets (for it is in London that our scene lies), rattling along the house-tops, and fiercely agitating the scanty flame of the lamps that struggled against the darkness. Through one of the obscurest quarters of London, and among haunts little loved by the gentlemen of the police, a man, evidently of the lowest orders, was wending his solitary way.

"Through one of the obscurest quarters of London, and among haunts little loved by the gentlemen of the police..." That ain't bad. Compare to James Fucking Fenimore Cooper:

    It was a feature peculiar to the colonial wars of North America, that the toils and dangers of the wilderness were to be encountered before the adverse hosts could meet. A wide and apparently an impervious boundary of forests severed the possessions of the hostile provinces of France and England. The hardy colonist, and the trained European who fought at his side, frequently expended months in struggling against the rapids of the streams, or in effecting the rugged passes of the mountains, in quest of an opportunity to exhibit their courage in a more martial conflict.

But Cooper is shoved down the throats of high school students everywhere while Bulwer-Lytton gets the shit kicked out of him by smarmy, know-it-all English majors every goddamn year.

For the record:

    Beneath the rule of men entirely great

    The pen is mightier than the sword. Behold

    The arch-enchanters wand! — itself is nothing! —

    But taking sorcery from the master-hand

    To paralyse the Cæsars, and to strike

    The loud earth breathless! — Take away the sword —

    States can be saved without it!

- Edward Bulwer-Lytton

You might not call the Twilight opener a bad sentence, but the number of people hating on Twilight outnumbers the number of people living in the Western hemisphere. Do they hate on Marquez? No, they hate on you for not having read Marquez. Likewise, it is the most common thing in the world to hate the fuck out of Da Vinci Code without having read the Da Vinci Code.

And that's the fundamental shape of these "contests" - "write something that you'd make fun of other people for reading." And they all have unsold novels, and they all have a bookshelf full of shit "you haven't heard of" (even when you have) and they're all very, very proud that they have a very good degree from a very good school that doesn't provide them a very good living.

No, seriously. Fuck this shit. It's the attitude that makes "literature" "anything you wouldn't read for fun."





thenewgreen  ·  3180 days ago  ·  link  ·  

I've never read any of the Twighlight books but if they're as good as A Hundred Years of Solitude, sign me up. It's not the first sentence that matters so much as it is the next few thousand that follow.

kleinbl00  ·  3180 days ago  ·  link  ·  

EXACTLY THIS

And that's why I hate these fucking things.

user-inactivated  ·  3180 days ago  ·  link  ·  

I don't need to read the Da Vinci code to hate the Da Vinci code, I just need a summary and some knowledge of cryptography. Or even just to know what semiotics is. I get that this is a conversation about style, but more of the hate I see for the Da Vinci Code is over not having done his homework.

kleinbl00  ·  3180 days ago  ·  link  ·  

in defense of Dan Brown

user-inactivated  ·  3180 days ago  ·  link  ·  

That's not a defense of Dan Brown, it just means he has poor taste in kooks. There is crazy awesome and there is crazy boring, and even Garth Ennis couldn't make the grail stuff fun when he used it in Preacher. Now, give me novel about Dion Fortune, Ian Flemming and Aleister Crowley summoning King Arthur on the white cliffs of Dover to stop Operation Sea Lion and I'll forgive all sorts of awkward prose.

kleinbl00  ·  3180 days ago  ·  link  ·  

How 'bout a book about the founder of JPL using Crowleyan magick to summon a storm to destroy L. Ron Hubbard and his ex-girlfriend?

Or a book about the guy who wrote James and the Giant Peach spying on the US for Britain and influencing the American war effort by flirting with Eleanor Roosevelt?

Best I can do. They both happen to be true, so I doubt there's a decent work that puts them together, but you never know.

I won't recommend Da Vinci Code to anyone. It's basically a Rocky & Bullwinkle novel. But as Rocky & Bullwinkle novels go, it has the most Jesus in it of any I know.

user-inactivated  ·  3180 days ago  ·  link  ·  
kleinbl00  ·  3179 days ago  ·  link  ·  

So awesome.

StJohn  ·  3180 days ago  ·  link  ·  

Haha, you don't hate the book on literary techniques, you hate the people quoting from it. I totally agree, I'd much rather read Bulwer-Lytton than Cooper and I have very little interest in what other people think I ABSOLUTELY MUST read. If you're surrounded by people bullshitting you about literature, then maybe you want to find more friends who aren't snobs.