The reflection of the fire against the amber color in her eyes intensified her gaze. The bonfire roared , and the students cheered in victory into the night sky. The outcome of the game didn't change that moment for Gabriel. He slowly made his approach; with every step thinking of how to break the ice. Maybe something simple? A compliment? His time was up. Aurelia Laurant, the french exchange student, stood right next to him. She glanced at him revealing a charming smile, and he replied in kind. Music slowly began to build from the trunk of a students car. Her smile widened revealing a straight set of teeth as the music got louder. With a rhythm that followed the music with deadly accuracy she swayed. Without much control Gabe accepted her invitation. Her gaze had lost it's intensity, but gained a quality of intoxication. Gabe rocked from left to right with her; the whole time hoping time would work on repeat for a bit. The song finally ended, and with it the moment. Aurelia smiled once more before being pulled into the crowd by her friends for the next song. This was written really quickly before I had to go to work, so it's rough. Feel free to set phaser to destroy.
I actually really like this. You might be able to tell from my other feedback that I like to be able to "see" the scene and I felt like I could in this one. Maybe expand the setting out a bit, building the ground with the sky, but that's pretty minor. There's good feelings and a pleasant conclusion. I like it.