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lil  ·  3686 days ago  ·  link  ·    ·  parent  ·  post: My poem went up early marry Xmas you guys MARRY IT

Well done...

  Cut me off in little pieces. No -
  cut me off in one long strip.
  Cast me past your shoulder
  and I'll curl, shape out initials
  of the girl you'll love, who isn't,
  in any measure, me.




_refugee_  ·  3685 days ago  ·  link  ·  

Thanks lil! It is a bit crazy to me still that this poem finally made it into the world.

lil  ·  3685 days ago  ·  link  ·  

A poem about a real or literary pain. It's good to pack that pain off into these wonderful metaphoric places and move on to .... to.... new adventures. (I was going to say new pain, but no).