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comment by coffeesp00ns
coffeesp00ns  ·  3991 days ago  ·  link  ·    ·  parent  ·  post: Editable Poem #2: What Did We Learn?

well, it ended up referencing the poem in a really great way.

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  Under the words that were omitted
  lie the noise, work, and death
  Missing workers walk slowly,
  stop to take each breath.

  Under the words that were deleted
  I sit here with the few
  Trying not be defeated
  I move an inch closer to you. 

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