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humanodon  ·  4091 days ago  ·  link  ·    ·  parent  ·  post: Today's Writing Prompt: Water

Nice. I still think that this can be developed, if you're of a mind to. I don't know if that little break in the dashes is intentional, but it does give the sense that entropy has entered the system of the poem.





coffeesp00ns  ·  4091 days ago  ·  link  ·  

frankly, the dashes are because I am bad at figuring out formatting and needed a way to make the mirror effect! I'm going to keep working on it.

humanodon  ·  4091 days ago  ·  link  ·  

They're really working for me and honestly, I think that the reason that they do is that I wouldn't have thought to use them in that way, evocative as they are of a picture of water. Glad to hear you'll work on it some more.

coffeesp00ns  ·  4091 days ago  ·  link  ·  

creativity inspired by necessity.