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user-inactivated · 4370 days ago · link · · parent · post: THE RESTAURANT AT THE START OF THE UNIVERSE (6/7): The bed and breakfast, 2115AD
I don't know about everyone else, but I'm saving whatever "criticism" I have for the end. Not about to judge a story before it's finished, at least in this case. EDIT: and further, I know you're not particularly looking for constructive criticism here like you would be in a producer's office. So there's not a whole lot of point to it.