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lil  ·  4312 days ago  ·  link  ·    ·  parent  ·  post: Today's Writing Prompt: Where We Hide

What's really poignant about your piece is that the disclaimer at the end mirrors the hiding in the poem

    Would never see the light of day otherwise, I think.
That is to say, being exhausted made it possible to bring the sad self out of hiding. Thx!




user-inactivated  ·  4312 days ago  ·  link  ·  

Thanks for reading, I'm going to try to respond to these more often. I love writing poetry because you don't have to use words that mean quite what they normally mean as long as you don't lose your sense of purpose.