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user-inactivated  ·  3039 days ago  ·  link  ·    ·  parent  ·  post: Today's Writing Prompt: A Person and A Place

Definitely could use some polish. With these I make an effort not to worry about anything too much so these are essentially first drafts off the cuff. Hopefully I can just practice more and develop my natural flow in a positive direction.

Isherwood  ·  3039 days ago  ·  link  ·  

I'll keep it in mind.

user-inactivated  ·  3039 days ago  ·  link  ·  

Don't go easy on me or anything. Your critique has helped to focus my efforts in developing that flow.