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War  ·  3469 days ago  ·  link  ·    ·  parent  ·  post: Writing Prompt: No dialogue

Definitely a great piece to read. The only real criticism is the prompt wants us to have a conversation without the conversation. In it she talks to him. The detail was so rich that I wanted to know what she said to him.





goo  ·  3469 days ago  ·  link  ·  

Ah, I may have misinterpreted. If I were to alter my piece to be more suitable, I wouldn't have her say anything. Rather, it would have been the end of a conversation. In any case, isn't that the most important part?