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comment by arguewithatree
arguewithatree  ·  3446 days ago  ·  link  ·    ·  parent  ·  post: Writing Prompt: No dialogue

I think the only think I would suggest that hasn't been suggested is varying the beginnings of your sentences. Too many "the"s for my taste.