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onlythelonly · 3848 days ago · link · · parent · post: Wrote and recorded this song the other night.

1:13. Is that dissonance intentional?

I don't think the guitar should pick up til the end, maybe. I think drums, or another instrument, ya know?

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thenewgreen · 3847 days ago · link ·

1:13. Is that dissonance intentional? -Not likely. I tend to have about 1-2 hours at a time to make something and therefore, I irrationally attempt to write, record and mix it all in that time frame. The results tend to often be poorly mixed, not well written songs but once in a while it works out. Not sure this one did or not.

I don't think the guitar should pick up til the end, maybe. I think drums, or another instrument, ya know? I agree about it picking up more towards the end. -I intentionally left space for electric guitar/drums/bass and other synth etc to be able to pick the song up and take it somewhere. Right now, it's pretty sparse as far as my stuff goes.

Thanks for the feedback! I appreciate you checking it out.