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rezzeJ  ·  3816 days ago  ·  link  ·    ·  parent  ·  post: Can you come up with the first line of a novel/story?  ·  

Your advice is valid and it's something I'll remember, but it's much harder to accept when presented arrogantly. I had to spend a minute or two resisting from defending some my attempts, even though I knew you were correct. I was tempted to ignore it at first. And I still felt the need to make this pointless response.





user-inactivated  ·  3815 days ago  ·  link  ·    ·  

I was coming off a baseball argument with someone else and it leaked over. I knew it was happening but I couldn't really control ittttt it was terrible. Sorry.

You were much fairer with me than I with you (though I wasn't talking about you specifically). That will definitely influence the dots. The dots are already beginning to speak...

EDIT: I remembered there was an apology button.

rezzeJ  ·  3815 days ago  ·  link  ·  

No worries, I know it wasn't intentional. And I know you weren't addressing me specifically. :)