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thenewgreen  ·  3973 days ago  ·  link  ·    ·  parent  ·  post: Pantun, Pantoums, And Malay Poetry

I agree, what a wonderful poem. The use of repetition can often seem a ploy in poetry but it works fantastically here. Beautiful stuff!