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Bone white snow forest Still, quiet, stained pink with dawn; One plump, red robin.
thenewgreen · 4325 days ago · link ·
This one is beautiful. I've always liked the juxtaposition of red on white as in the Fleet Foxes White Winter Hymnal. -great work. But upon further reading, doesn't the second line have 8 syllables? Still, nice work.
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Complexity · 4325 days ago · link ·
Thanks! Maybe US English is quie-et. My clipped British accent pronounces it as one syllable. (on reflection, edited to replace 'and' with a semicolon as a kiru)
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thenewgreen · 4325 days ago · link ·
Thanks, I didn't realize that. Quiet was definitely the culprit.