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_refugee_  ·  3990 days ago  ·  link  ·    ·  parent  ·  post: Editable Poem #2: What Did We Learn?

When I see it done successfully, the lines are rarely endstopped (rhyme, I mean). I find that end-stopped rhyming lines usually beat one over the head.