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user-inactivated  ·  4018 days ago  ·  link  ·    ·  parent  ·  post: Hubski Collaborative Song #2 with Drums/Percussion -Need Feedback

Like I said, I've got some ideas for background stuff, but nothing in the foreground. Run with it.





thenewgreen  ·  4018 days ago  ·  link  ·  

Alright, I recorded some vocals that I'm not terribly thrilled with. There are parts I really enjoy, but others I don't. The lyrics are trite, but universal:

  Foolish with time
  Careless with this heart of mine

  Waking up
  Getting to the point
  where feet hitting the floor
  Is not a chore anymore
It's not Hemingway, but then he never was much of a songwriter. What are your thoughts fuffle?

https://soundcloud.com/thenewgreenmusic-com/foolish-with-tim...

user-inactivated  ·  4018 days ago  ·  link  ·  

Hell yeah, this is awesome! Got some ideas for harmonies, too. Are there any outliers that haven't contributed yet?

thenewgreen  ·  4018 days ago  ·  link  ·  

I don't think so. I know that ecib was considering working on one of the tunes. I'm VERY excited for the harmony ideas, I intentionally left the middle of the song open. I was thinking a big bgood79 guitar solo could be cool. I hear a nice crunchy guitar part to come in with your organ. Take it instrumental for the most part till the end, what do you think?

thenewgreen  ·  4018 days ago  ·  link  ·  

Opening wine, heading downstairs to studio. Game on.