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JakobVirgil  ·  4325 days ago  ·  link  ·    ·  parent  ·  post: I'm a crummy poet, but I'm writing a poem a day for 2013

Reply for Jan 1

Death singing 'the neck is always our future, a texture of sun' a bird fell.

Pretend you can hear our voices, a wing, sand, old cypress. You, stiff but your elbow.

More about us behind, we feel the heat of the sun, and touch your wrinkles and skin from the skin.

The walk always grave we arrived when they do not feel interested in the factors. You.





littlebirdie  ·  4325 days ago  ·  link  ·  

Thank you. This is truly awesome. Here, a little stanza in response to your beautiful work:

When I woke, the sun still below the Sandia peaks winked, knowing her rays captured All.