I could get through about 1 minute of that video. Not only was the recording quality of his voice attrocious (it sounded as if he was speaking through a guitar fuzz pedal), and the jokes weak, but his delivery was incredibly off-putting. It sounded as if he had written so many jokes that he had to hurry to get through them all, and he constantly sounded on the verge of bursting out into laughter.
Protip: You don't need to use every single joke you write. Throw out the filler, and maybe you'll have something strong enough for me to sit through it.