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lil  ·  4117 days ago  ·  link  ·    ·  parent  ·  post: Story club part XII

Please continue to edit as you go through. There are still some paragraphs that are way too long, and some discontinuities - but I suppose that's to be expected when there are 10 authors in search of a storyline. Take the opening for example, with the dates and the constitution. Maybe thenewgreen will reincorporate that at some point (or take it out). Anyway, have fun. It's a lovely experiment in collaborative mindmeld.

I might have made some editing errors also - it was way too late and I couldn't see what I was doing as I kept falling asleep.