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I like that the notion of "fan death" works its way through other sleep superstitions and their rituals into a specific instance of a sleep ritual that is not a superstition. I also think "twist-inducing" is clever. The second poem, "Any Body" reminds me of Pound's "In a Station of the Metro"
The last time I posted a short poem, the poet showed up. Somehow I doubt that'll happen this time. The apparition of these faces in the crowd :
Petals on a wet, black bough .