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lil  ·  4033 days ago  ·  link  ·    ·  parent  ·  post: Today's Writing Prompt: Where We Hide

Hi rezzeJ - Have you seen this video about how eminem puts together rhymes. He does't get to talking about eminem until about 3'16" -- The speaker says that rap music liberated the rhyme scheme from the usual end-of-line pattern. (This isn't true of course given that "The Raven" was written in 1845), but my point is that your internal rhymes in this poem reminded me of the rhymes in Lose Yourself. I'm looking forward to seeing more of your poems in these threads. I saw the other new one, but haven't had a chance to reply yet.