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I keep coming back to your startling poem
wondering what "it" is: both of these images shed light on "it"...but the light is blinding.
Could you possibly add a title which gives "it" away? Would "The Truth" be a possible title?It hides in what is hidden to mask
its own hiding and in the sunlight of epiphany it shines
brightly and slips away before the spots can clear our eyes
I've had that sunlight of epiphany and know how it dazzles -- about as brightly as The long snake of firecrackers, exploding as doubt.