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user-inactivated  ·  4267 days ago  ·  link  ·    ·  parent  ·  post: Half Empty -A song I wrote and recently recorded

I love this. I think the bit where the chorus comes in ("the cup's half empty...") could use a little bit of flair (besides brief drumroll) to match the rising volume of the vocals.