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   I read the "Jupiter protocol"

After all, thoses shorts are an easy read, by skimming the boring past, I see myself coming for more.

I try to see the AI pattern. So far: Unecessary Time jump . And boring everyday dialog still in. Weirdn as some dialogs are perfectly fine but the Ai keep some uninteresting one in here.

One point during the story, at the begining, I would have bet a human writer did some editing.