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thenewgreen  ·  4714 days ago  ·  link  ·    ·  parent  ·  post: ASK HUBSKI: Three emotive songs?
Sure, it stands on it's own as a poem. It's pretty fantastical and not necessarily the type of poem I would choose to read but it definitely stands. It reads very lyrically, which makes sense.

Now I want to hear the song!

I know what you mean though, I have had to type out my own lyrics for various reasons in the past and I'm never sure how they read because I can never separate them from melody. It's impossible.