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We were writing poems at the same time on the same topic. Must be the psychic paging system. Again.
The lines here about breathing remind me of a conversation I had today about breathing - conversation with a diver about encounters with sharks. He says that sharks can hear much better than he can under water - they can hear his breathing and heartbeat.
Who, I wondered, tests shark hearing?
I always read your poems as songs.
Regarding the poem here: purposefully not look too hard: ouch.