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lil  ·  3824 days ago  ·  link  ·    ·  parent  ·  post: Today's Writing Prompt: The fog of love

We were writing poems at the same time on the same topic. Must be the psychic paging system. Again.

The lines here about breathing remind me of a conversation I had today about breathing - conversation with a diver about encounters with sharks. He says that sharks can hear much better than he can under water - they can hear his breathing and heartbeat.

Who, I wondered, tests shark hearing?

I always read your poems as songs.

Regarding the poem here: purposefully not look too hard: ouch.