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coffeesp00ns  ·  4091 days ago  ·  link  ·    ·  parent  ·  post: Today's Writing Prompt: Water

we are two ripples in one pond---------------------------------------------------------in one pond we are two ripples

energy commencing from separate points-----------------------------------separate energies converging on a point

forcibly, and inevitably moving towards each other-------------each other moving together forcibly and inevitably

------------------------------------------------------------we collide--------------------------------------------------------

--------------------------------- then move apart again----------move apart, then again-------------------------------

--------------- encountering other ripples------------------------------- other ripples we encounter-------------------

fading into entropy---------------------------------------------------------------------- ----------------fade into entropy

a few minor changes