we are two ripples in one pond---------------------------------------------------------in one pond we are two ripples
energy commencing from separate points-----------------------------------separate energies converging on a point
forcibly, and inevitably moving towards each other-------------each other moving together forcibly and inevitably
------------------------------------------------------------we collide--------------------------------------------------------
--------------------------------- then move apart again----------move apart, then again-------------------------------
--------------- encountering other ripples------------------------------- other ripples we encounter-------------------
fading into entropy---------------------------------------------------------------------- ----------------fade into entropy
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