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_refugee_  ·  4053 days ago  ·  link  ·    ·  parent  ·  post: Editable poem

This is probably among my favorite sort of exercises in poetry: taking something that's already there and tweaking, playing with it, seeing what you can take out and improve.

I've had a lot of fun with this. I was just wondering, would it be interesting if the OP were able to access a log of edits? No editors could see it, just OP. That way someone would be aware of who did what, in this case to see the path of changes.