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It's probably way to cryptic, I know why they are leaving and where thay are going - and in my head this is part of a larger story where it's all explained. I need to work on actually being a bit clearer when I'm writing short scenes.
It's probably a bit of a bait and switch on my end - saying I want a scene then complaining there's not the context of a full story. If it's any consolation, the scene has a lot of weight to it and the characters are convicted enough to show there's a whole world around them, so I know the rest of the story is there, I just want to see it.