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comment by thenewgreen

    That's some Nels Cline shit right there.
Well that got my attention, thanks man. Paging bgood79.

I guess I'll go back and listen again. I'll definitely remove the panning, that was part of the "destroying."

I wrote/recorded this a while back and it was just so damned vanilla and "cutesy" lyrically that I hated it. I needed to "break it" so I did. Perhaps broken it's actually more interesting?

Thanks for the feedback pal. Hope you've been able to steel away some moments and play too.





ghostoffuffle  ·  3890 days ago  ·  link  ·  

It's not like you're in the habit of writing twee songs. A lot of your posted content is pretty heavy- doesn't seem like there's anything wrong with cutting it every once in a while with lighter lyrics. And yeah, juxtaposed against the guitar, they don't come off as so precious. You planning on taking it further?

thenewgreen  ·  3890 days ago  ·  link  ·  

    You planning on taking it further?
-I wasn't, but now that you've rekindled enthusiasm for it, I may. I dunno. You can have it if you'd like :) Did they have a "Camp Shiawasee" where you grew up that the kids with money got to go to?
ghostoffuffle  ·  3890 days ago  ·  link  ·  

Never heard of anything like that, it sounds obscene. Only ever went to B'nai Brith camp growing up.

Gimme that song.