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Floatbox  ·  3814 days ago  ·  link  ·    ·  parent  ·  post: Today's Writing Prompt: I'd Like to Be Whoever I Damn Well Please

    Concept splintered, threaded together
    Tangled outfits of neural nets
    The outside put together:

    I am the monitor and the camera.
    The mirror exists in me and I am the mirror.
    I watch myself writing
    You shaped by your gorgeous skin.
    
    Can't I demand of what you create of me?

    Think of me without stereotype.
    No shortcuts. Think of me as a thoughtful edit.
    Think of me as sexy. Think of
    My eyes. Sparkly no? 
    
    They are windows though
    My soul by upside down spark
    Of your own optical nerve
    And then a gestalt.




lil  ·  3809 days ago  ·  link  ·  

   Think of me without stereotype.
   
I like that challenge. I'd like to spend a day without stereotypical thinking about anything - wide open to direct unmediated experience. Of course - that's what social networks, like hubski, allow up to a point.

   No shortcuts. Think of me as a thoughtful edit.
   Think of me as sexy. Think of
   My eyes. Sparkly no?
Wonderful line...

Question:

In the next line, do you mean though? I keep reading it as "through" which is what I am seeing as I stereotype the "th" and the "ough" into being another word.