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Isherwood  ·  2742 days ago  ·  link  ·    ·  parent  ·  post: Today's Writing Prompt: The End

Interesting ending. The food cart was well described as was its owner. I still want to know how everyone feels in this situation. I know there's surprise at the abruptness of the departure but some internal dialogue could help to flesh out who the character is. It's a good arc, a little ethereal, but overall enjoyable.