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goo  ·  3451 days ago  ·  link  ·    ·  parent  ·  post: Writing Prompt: No dialogue

She sat beside me on the overstuffed sofa. Her shoulders crumpled under a heavy burden, her eyes chained to the floor. If I wasn't holding her hand, she might have sunk between the cushions, beyond my grasp.

I remained silent as she told me her story. Her voice was clipped, occasionally tightening in tune with her hand. She was a shell of her former self, but I still greedily drank in her beautiful form, the faint lilt of her accent, the impossible softness of her palm.

When she finished, I opened my mouth to respond, but could not find the words. She remained still. It was only when I stood and left that I heard a soft whimper follow me out.

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