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amouseinmyhouse  ·  3448 days ago  ·  link  ·    ·  parent  ·  post: Writing Prompt: Image Prompt

You really hit your stride after the first few paragraphs. I would recommend reading the first part again, maybe out loud, to edit for clarity.

The world is solid and I loved the idea of a nobel magical city falling to the worst traits of human nature. More on that mundane moral decay might be interesting.

It's a good story and it was interesting to the end. Well done.