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user-inactivated  ·  3438 days ago  ·  link  ·    ·  parent  ·  post: What do you think of the video I made about vegan activists?

If I could make one change, it would be the pacing. There is a huge difference between the opening sequences and the sampling of youtubers. The former feels well done, that latter is... frenetic at times. I had a hard time getting engaged with parts of the film because of that.

Other ideas:

- If I find one person's story compelling, there isn't a way for me investigate that further. Maybe show their name or a link when they first appear?

- Pizza shirt lady feels forced in. She does offer opposing views which then get addressed, but this video is a collage of film snippets anyways. Those snippets don't really need an opponent to answer. It doesn't change the message of the film (or at least the one I got) if you just skip over her.