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bristolstreet  ·  3420 days ago  ·  link  ·    ·  parent  ·  post: Today's Writing Prompt: What Can a Broken Heart Do?

  The first heart jumped-- beat down
  against your settled gut, replete
  with a little lovelorn lateyear ambition.

  I'm not saying it became yours then:
  but the familiar knew a new death,
  and in that instant each cell
  flowed with new acrobatics.

  You left me with the second heart
  careless in its skips and turns and, worse,
  stitched hollow with your absence.

  I became the artist of my own desolation,
  flung it angry from my ravaged chest, let it
  splatter reckless on the empty canvas,
  our precious past made spectacle.

  This third one's my own. Homegrown,  
  every cry and moan echoed
   in the ebb and return. 

  Darling, let's not speak of love: 
  leave it to charm.
A little cliché. I had trouble anthropomorphizing a heart so I empowered the "I" instead. I should learn to be more comfortable with that, though, so I don't fall into the first person trap all of the time.