Full Disclosure: I am a writer and artist of this webcomic. I am looking for new readers, and a place to share my work. I am hoping that users of hubski may be interested in my content. Please click through if you would like to see thoughtful, and hopefully funny comics. Please leave comments, share, and generally enjoy. Thank you.
I liked the one with the promiscuous computer. Clever. The drawing is good and there are some good ideas there. Keep at it. I just did my first ever comic-like illustration, you can see it here. It was fun.
Awesome, thanks newgreen. I checked out your comic, and I liked it. the illustration is naive/bad/good because it is bad. It tells the whole story in 4 panels. Really good. my only advice would be to make the lettering more clear. the art style is fine as is. Glad you liked our comics. keep checking for more, and keep up drawing your own. Good Luck.
You might want to work on the stories a bit. Some of them were kind of pointless, but I do really like the art style. And for the funny ones try to work on the punchline some more.
Lol. What do you really think? I'm joking. That is great feedback. Thanks for taking the time to look through my comics. Thanks for liking the art style. hopefully I will get better at telling stories that have more of a point. I admit I am new at creating a narrative, and it takes some getting used to. If you ever want to send some more feedback my way, or if you have more specific comments, you can leave them on the site or email me at step3comics@gmail.com Thanks!
Also I look forward to seeing more of them around here.
they are good don't get me wrong it's just that sometimes the punchlines fall flat.
yeah, totally agree about the punchlines. my writing partner and I struggle with that part, and I am hoping after a number of initial stories, that gets easier. It's hard, because the ideas we come up with are clever at the outset, it is just hard to put them in 6 panels and make it come out sounding genius. Well, if it wasn't hard to do, it wouldn't be worth doing. Thanks again for the feedback. Glad there are real humans out on the internet still. Even if you are almost a robot.