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comment by flagamuffin
flagamuffin  ·  2175 days ago  ·  link  ·    ·  parent  ·  post: a love poem

Thanks for the feedback. I really hate that line about the grave. It doesn't work well. I wrote this years ago, I'm sure, so I don't really remember what I was thinking.