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user-inactivated  ·  2872 days ago  ·  link  ·    ·  parent  ·  post: 180th Weekly "Share Some Music You've Been Into Lately" Thread

Over the last month or so, I've become a huge fan of a metalcore band called Silent Planet. I really feel like their songwriting is far beyond most metal bands, especially lyrically. Their vocalist, Garrett Russell is an incredible writer.

    "Lustrous lines obscured by opaque blinds -

    frozen metacarpals tap tap tap the window glass.

    Syncopated staccatos with the broken clock

    synchronized with my post-traumatic ticks ticks -

    talking to the space in the room that echoes back indiscernibly

    to my disconnected self/self -

    it’s self-consuming, what's ensuing is my undoing -

    the nightly casualty of war. [1]

    And it sounds like this: War, endless war.

    In my endless dance with entropy

    I must rescind my sentience,

    the sickness that I know. [2]

    Rearrange the disarray of disintegrated senses -

    puzzle pieces, spectral splinters of a soldier’s worn and tattered soul.

    In my endless dance with entropy

    I must rescind my sentience,

    the sickness that I know."