Quickest way to make a villain is to have some human character kill the dog. Everyone will instantly want to see that guy dead. :p Sounds like you've got at least a few key scenes happening. Have you been working on an outline or a way to tie the scenes together? If you've got a stand-alone scene already written, or a test scene, don't be afraid to post to #worldbuilding and #shortstory and get feedback!
I'll keep that in mind. I have a few strokes for the story: some scenes done better than others. It's a long way to go, still: I gotta finish #crystalclear first. (Which reminds me: I have to find a better host for those stories: Wattpad turned out to be incapable of serving unregistered readers.)
Google Docs/Drive? You can set it to publicly read-only. I've got a regular blog. I used to have another one specifically for fiction and poetry, so it's certainly doable to make a fiction blog.I have to find a better host for those stories: Wattpad turned out to be incapable of serving unregistered readers.