I agree with steve's critique, the audio could be vastly improved. I enjoyed some of the edits and the narrative you are constructing. I actually feel weird watching this because I'm one of those "diet coke" brown people and I'm sitting in an airport. I bet the person sitting next to me thinks I'm up to no good if they saw my computer screen while I'm watching this. One thing I noticed: you spend a lot of time intro-ing this video. I bet that if you tried, you could cut that in half and still maintain the same integrity of the video. I enjoyed the time speaking with the "expert." The edits that you have during his bit are kind of abrupt and occur while the camera is still on him. That's a big odd, right? Normally these edits occur when he's not on camera, right? I'm not an expert in editing, but it's kind of jarring. At 6:20, what is the benefit of showing you sitting down and typing? What you are doing is cool. I'm glad you are sharing it here and I look forward to seeing more. Good luck sleepydustking!