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lil  ·  3657 days ago  ·  link  ·    ·  parent  ·  post: a love poem

There's a lot of things I like about it: the squirrel, the housecat, the way wronged and strong rhyme (and grail, attain, assail) (and all those hard b's in the third stanza), because restraint is hard and you bite your lip.

It sounds a little unrequited, if it weren't for the embrace!

ahh the embrace. Have fun flags.